personal space evation

this was the frist project in 3rd year and all ready looking back im ahppy with how i approced it but i think i needed to conture shooting it was only a 2 week project so to get the idea and to reshoot after it was pretty hard i did plan on reshooting but then i got carryed away with the vermmer project i find it hard two work on two project at once so i seemed to just forget about this one even with the log book whare i did just forgot about it and just left some of it to now.

the compertition project evaltion

with this project to i dont think i got to the finshing point in the project i think i didnt shoot early enouth that was really cause i struggled to get my head around the project i did start of thinking that i would of done the fuji film project because i know the book silent spring and i was thinking about that project to much. but from what i have im happy with the images i would of like to shoot on medium format and with out such a wide angle lense i found out that some of the images got distorted and then it loses the dead pan effect also when things are out of place its really easy to spot them so i think i want to spend more time on looking at the seperate inages now i have a better idea for what im looking for

Vemmer Evaltion

from looking all the work i have produced i think these are my favort and the ones that i have taken the furthes i have really enjoyed having a long project to work on. i did find that i found my idea came quite quickly with out much reasurch really needed my last project last year was going this driction and its just been nice to expolre it more and take it further. i do also like it how iv steped quite far away from vemmers work. alot of peoples work seemed to be quite simular with the portraits and taking the image the girl with the peal earing and using that. but i liek the fact i have created somthing quite sirreal. i do think i could of gone further with the images i would of like to take the shoot out side i think but im still not to sure ware i could of gone with it. i think i would like to try it conture with it i think it seems that im not finshed with this project at this point and i still can do some more to the images and have them better thought out

compertiton images two

these shots were rushed just to try and get some better images before the hand on but i dont think any of them can really replase the images i used before hand because some of the images wer shot when it was a bit fogy and some of the qulty was lost in some of the fog. but with the reshoot i couldnt get the right camar and lense i do think tho the problem is tho that i cant get quite far enouth away from the shot with out using a wide angle lense wich then distorts the image to much i have came to relise that with this project i think i need to look at the deatles it is now tho to late to reshoot again. but now i do pefure the images from my frist serise of work from what i have so far and i think they are the ones im going to use for the compertion.
this i think is somthing i would like to conture and take further, i think i could look at the contrast places and towns.

i have found out somthing that is quite obvious really when you think about it that rich people genurly dont live on terraces. so im not sure i think it woulnd work as a compassiom pice so now i think the pice will just be looking at povty in the area and with this pice being in blackpool it seems also a lot easer to photograh the povty as i have came to relise that their is quite a lot of it around


i wanted to reshoot this image and have it closer in than the last as sarah thought it dosnt but im not to sure i think i perfure the image from further away ware it was busyer and then when you notest it, it seems out of place more so

Mill

these are a slection of the images i took from the shoot its not all of them as i shot about 70 images but i think its a range of them showing the problem i came up with from the lighting i wanted it to be showing more of the light at the time but thenyou would get to much of a glare from the light.i think the landscape images are the best and when the modle isnt toching the floor worksbest to. im amazied by the deatle from the nikon d3 i think if i used diglat i will only use that camar nowerdays. i quite like the shapes from the square on shoots the image is all filled with stronge lines











here is the final image and i think its a vast improvment from the the shot with reachel in the bed i just perfure it also i think it fits in with the serise much better with the tones and the harsh contrast with all the foure images their seems to be a simular feel to it also i think its better that the person is interacting with the light and intreaged by it. this happens in all the other shots. the only problem for me with this image is some of the dirt on the carpet and the mess on the left but im not sure if that really matter just for me its a bit distracting. i do think this is my favort image out of the serise now

AOP

As i dont have enouth money to enter the Aop awards this term i think i will just be getting it all ready for the hand in and then entering the compertion next term with my images i dont think i want to shot anything exspely for it as im really happy with the images i have been shooting. as its such an open compertion i do wonder what to entre ever my vemmer images or the one that i am entering for the d and ad comperition. i am leaning to some of my vemmer images i think i will be looking to entre a few as the images are a serise i think their stronger if i keep them as that so i think i will be useing my 4 vemmer images for it.


when i said this i hadnt look at any of the categories and now i have im not sure how they would fit in thinking about it the categories are

lifestyle and portraiture

fashion and beauty

landscape interiors and exteriors

and still life

and from what they have put in the discritions im not sure ware my vemmer images would fit so i was thinking i think i may uses some of the images wich im not using for the d and ad compertion. As i have two serises i think i will some of the images from the serise that im not using

serise 2.

i think this serise is more about the deailes with in the shot tonaly i think the last one is the most diffent but i still feel it fits in with it. all these shots are much closer in to the subjects than the other one. im not sure tho if it is quite as effective as the frist one i think i perfure them being that step back. Also i did find out that the image above is quite like another students here wich isnt too cool